Category: Antagonists

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Piecing Together an Antagonist

Posted on by beckylevine

Yesterday, Sherrie Petersen at Write About Now reminded me about a critical element of the antagonist–they don’t change.

I know…but sometimes I forget.

This was actually part of Sherrie’s post on making sure that every character except the antagonist has a story arc, at the end of which they do change. But, yeah, not the antagonist.

I’ve been working these last few days, to try and get closer to my antagonist, to turn her into a real person who does real things to impact/hurt my hero. I’ve been doing research about the type of person I know her to be, and I’ve been checking into my craft books on techniques for creating this character role in a story.

I haven’t pulled together a complete picture yet, but here are a few of the thoughts & pieces that have been floating around in my mind and my computer:

  • Just because the antagonist doesn’t change, this does not mean they don’t have a goal. They do. It’s got to be, in basics, the same goal as the hero–hence the big conflict as they each try to go after it.
  • I’m pretty sure it’s James Scott Bell (in Plot & Structure) that your antagonist had better be as strong, preferably stronger than, your hero. Otherwise, your hero, even if/when they win the battle, doesn’t come off looking all that powerful. Cuz, you know, maybe even a toy poodle could beat that wimpy antagonist.
  • The antagonist’s meanness or selfishness or paranoia or destructiveness has to translate into action. Just as each scene has to have your hero doing specific things to get to their goal, the antagonist has to do specific things to stop them, or to get to the goal themselves. Keyword here: specific. Snidley Whiplash doesn’t just sneer and bluster–he actually ties Penelope Pitstop to the railroad tracks. Okay, yes, over and over and over, but you get the point.

  • The antagonist has to have just as much (more?) at stake, in terms of not reaching their goal, as does the hero. Why does it matter so much to the bad guy to get the treasure, to keep the hero away from it? What will happen to the antagonist if they don’t win? And whatever something is, it had better be really, really bad. Symbolic or not, we’re talking life & death here–for both sides.
  • Layers. The antagonist has to have layers, just like the hero. Unless, you know, you’re purposely writing about Snidley and Penelope. The more you can make your reader understand the bad guy, the more tension you’re going to create on the page–because it’s not just all rooting for the good guy at this point. Wouldn’t it be great, you’ve got your reader thinking, if everybody could be happy? And they get all stressed out while they read, because they know that’s impossible. Tense, stressed reader? That’s a good thing!
  • You need to know what your antagonist is doing behind the scenes. Not just what they’re plotting and scheming, not just the traps they’re setting up for your hero that will cause great pain and strife, but their day-to-day life. What do they do when they’re not thinking directly about how to mess with the good guy? Because out of that daily routine will come the other stuff–if you know that, every morning, your antagonist has to drive across the Golden Gate bridge, well…suddenly you can start thinking about a really good car chase, with those orange (no, they’re not really gold!) pillars coming out of the fog, one by one, as the drivers barrel through all the traffic.

You need to do the work. This is what I’m telling myself right now, after writing a first draft in which the antagonist is pretty  much a limp, whiny noodle of a character. That it’s time to do the work, to figure out who this person is and what she does. Because, honestly, I can’t stand to write another draft without her being there, without her pushing buttons and creating problems–doing stuff.

What about you? How well do you know your bad guy? Got any tricks to share, for turning a vague sense of blech into a living, breathing character? Drop those thoughts into the comments!

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Antagonists: What Have They Lost?

Posted on by beckylevine

Okay, I admit, this feels like an odd post to be writing at the end of the year, with a new one and all its possibilities just around the corner. But I’m working on characters this week, and I’m spending quite a bit of time with my antagonists. All of whom, really, have their good sides. In fact, they’re all a little too nice at this point, and I’m digging for what they want so badly that it’s turning them against my MC.

And as I was thinking about one character’s particular want, I realized that this want–his deep, most real want–is impossible. He lost any chance of getting that want years ago–through no fault of his own. I know, storywise, that the path is not going to turn; it won’t be a surprise, happy ending for him. So…because without a goal, there is no plot, I needed to think of another want for him, less powerful maybe, but one that has filled in for the older need–one that still motivates his actions and choices in the story. A want that still makes problems for my MC.

It came to me pretty quickly. Okay, let’s face it, I was laying in bed not wanting to get up and character development is as good an excuse as any to stay warm and cozy.

The cool thing that I realized was that the new want hasn’t completely erased the old one. Oh, sure, the character is 99.9999% sure that he’ll get that old want. He knows it intellectually and at a gut level. But…he still wants it. If you said to him, what would you do to get X, he’d come up with a huge list of things he’d sacrifice. In a nano-second.

So what do you get with this character, then? You get a character who knows loss, and who will fight more strongly than ever to keep from losing more. I think  it’s this loss, this awareness of what they can’t have, that makes an antagonist so powerful in his battle. He can’t go back, can’t have that original want, but he will hold onto his “replacement” want with everything he’s got.

The character I was thinking about this morning, just to try and make things more clear, is my MC’s father. I don’t want to get too deeply into specifics, but his original want is the woman he fell in love with, his wife (the MC’s mother) as she was before something bad happened to her. He can’t have that woman–she is forever gone. She broke years ago, and she has changed permanently, but she has healed…some.  So his second want, the one he lives with now, is to keep safe the woman he does have, to stop anything from breaking her again.

Even if this means stopping his daughter.

What does this create? An antagonist in serious conflict with the hero. An antagonist who the reader will sympathize with (assuming I can actually write this!), and who will make big problems for the main character. An antagonist with power.

Take a look at your bad guy. What do they want, now, at this moment in the story. And then…what would they rather have? What have they, in essence, given up on, but still hold the tiniest bit of hope for? How many more sides do you see to this antagonist, when you add that extra piece?