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	<title>Comments on: When to Query</title>
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		<title>By: beckylevine</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-247</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 20:59:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Andra--thanks!

That last part is the hardest to push ourselves to but, in some ways, the most amazing part of revision--it&#039;s when things just get clean and beautiful and polished! Everything comes together. Good luck!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Andra&#8211;thanks!</p>
<p>That last part is the hardest to push ourselves to but, in some ways, the most amazing part of revision&#8211;it&#8217;s when things just get clean and beautiful and polished! Everything comes together. Good luck!</p>
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		<title>By: beckylevine</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-246</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 20:53:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[free2cr8--thanks! Fingers crossed. There&#039;s always a judgement call and a gut feeling, but I think those extra passes and lots of feedback are necessary. :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>free2cr8&#8211;thanks! Fingers crossed. There&#8217;s always a judgement call and a gut feeling, but I think those extra passes and lots of feedback are necessary. <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Andra M.</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-245</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Andra M.]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 20:38:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Congrats also on the submissions. 

A book is never complete, but merely as complete as our current writing ability will allow.

It seems there is always more to learn.

Your last suggestion is what I&#039;m working on now. Hopefully they&#039;ll all be addressed before I attend a writers conference in February.

Keep us apprised about your queries!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats also on the submissions. </p>
<p>A book is never complete, but merely as complete as our current writing ability will allow.</p>
<p>It seems there is always more to learn.</p>
<p>Your last suggestion is what I&#8217;m working on now. Hopefully they&#8217;ll all be addressed before I attend a writers conference in February.</p>
<p>Keep us apprised about your queries!</p>
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		<title>By: beckylevine</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-244</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 20:36:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Gottawrite Girl--

The restraint IS the hard part! Hang in there.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gottawrite Girl&#8211;</p>
<p>The restraint IS the hard part! Hang in there.</p>
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		<title>By: free2cr8</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-243</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 18:12:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Congrats on your submissions.  Love the checklist too.  I&#039;m nowhere near complete. But, it&#039;s nice to know what I should be doing to make sure that my manuscript is truly completed and ready to be let loose.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats on your submissions.  Love the checklist too.  I&#8217;m nowhere near complete. But, it&#8217;s nice to know what I should be doing to make sure that my manuscript is truly completed and ready to be let loose.</p>
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		<title>By: Gottawrite Girl</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-242</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Gottawrite Girl]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 16:56:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Oh lordie, I know the right thing to do is wait until the ms is completely finished, but OH what restraint! 

Thanks for posting, Becky, very informative!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh lordie, I know the right thing to do is wait until the ms is completely finished, but OH what restraint! </p>
<p>Thanks for posting, Becky, very informative!</p>
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		<title>By: beckylevine</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-241</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 14:49:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks, Mary-Frances,

I understand everybody&#039;s (including mine) need to test out what they&#039;re writing, but I just don&#039;t think that&#039;s the way it works. I think good agents really want to see our work, as strong as we can make it.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Mary-Frances,</p>
<p>I understand everybody&#8217;s (including mine) need to test out what they&#8217;re writing, but I just don&#8217;t think that&#8217;s the way it works. I think good agents really want to see our work, as strong as we can make it.</p>
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		<title>By: beckylevine</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-240</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[beckylevine]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 14:44:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks, Sue!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Sue!</p>
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		<title>By: Mary-Frances Makichen</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-239</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mary-Frances Makichen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 07:43:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Becky,
You&#039;re giving some great advice here. I was at a conference last year and there were writers pitching to agents even though their books were no where near being done. They said that wanted to see if the agents liked the concept of the book. If the agents didn&#039;t, the writers were going to change what they were writing. I think the guidelines you&#039;ve offered in this post are excellent.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Becky,<br />
You&#8217;re giving some great advice here. I was at a conference last year and there were writers pitching to agents even though their books were no where near being done. They said that wanted to see if the agents liked the concept of the book. If the agents didn&#8217;t, the writers were going to change what they were writing. I think the guidelines you&#8217;ve offered in this post are excellent.</p>
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		<title>By: Sue</title>
		<link>http://beckylevine.com/2008/12/16/when-to-query/#comment-238</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Dec 2008 03:51:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Good luck!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good luck!</p>
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